The right way to write; Paragraph 1

Today’s Tip – The right way to write; Paragraph 1 –

The most important paragraph is your first one. It is all about your intended person(s) and their past. Showing them how much you know about them allows a person(s) to get excited. You are feeding a truth that is “people care more about themselves than anyone else”. So, you give them that in a direct way. It also shows you did some research, work, and care about who you are contacting. Keep this paragraph, along with the others to around 3 or 4 sentences. No more or less than that for each paragraph.

The more involved your understanding of your person(s) the more they will relate to you. It will lead them to be interested in what you’ll have written in the second paragraph. Each paragraph needs to work together. Leading one from the other, and working well as a whole. A weak opener, middle, or ending will destroy a great proposal idea. So, concentrate on your research. Keep away from writing a bio, or listing of events in any of these paragraphs. You want to have a personal touch to it. Showing you are pointing out your interest of them.

Below is an example of someone writing paragraph one, to BBR Productions Inc.

What I appreciate about BBR Productions Inc. determination has always been its selflessness. Working hard to bring possibility to life, starting out as a one person company in illustration then turning into a multipurpose company over its 15 year growth. Helping more than just artists find their own path, but companies, individuals, and people looking for an opportunity to bring their dreams to reality. If, at all, this letter is a representation of my gratitude for your company’s inspiration for my personal success.

Deadly Nights (Band)


About BBR Productions Inc,

Our mission is to bring reality to your dreams by being an affordable all inclusive production company for every type of venture and those who wish to find success in their possibilities. In 1996 BBR Productions Inc., began which was strictly an illustration company working with local illustrators and comic book company’s. In 1997 BBR Productions Inc., expanded adding audio recordings, graphic and web design, photography and mass marketing. BBR Productions Inc., first major client was TENEbRAE although other bands were signed on to the company roster for marketing and graphic design layouts. During 2000 BBR Productions Inc., began setting up small local shows and organizing large musical events featuring national acts throughout the Tri-state area. Working with musical acts, comedians and actors BBR Productions Inc., expanded yet again to more of an all inclusive entertainment company. In 2007 Began doing more with direct consultation, helping others create opportunities as well as managing more acts. 2008 marked the 1st annual Laughter is the cure show, helping raise money for foundations such as "Multiple Sclerosis Foundation" and various "Cancer Foundations". Soon to be on its 5th year. In 2013 BBR Productions Inc., opened its offices on Long Island NY allowing space to do in house seminars helping others realize their dreams with the help of people who have already been there. On October 3rd, BBR Productions Inc., will open their second office in Holbrook growing from 1,000 square feet to 3,800 square feet.
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