Today’s Tip – The right way to write; Paragraph 2 –
As BBR Productions Inc. tells ya, it is always about your person(s) of interest. Allow them to be your main focus. Who cares what you have to offer, or what you want from them? Well, if you follow some rules of writing it is okay to use this second paragraph to your advantage. Since you sucked your reader in with information about them. Information that is important to them, showing you care enough to research what is going on, you have found your key to opening up a door to your needs. In paragraph 2 you present to your reader what your intent is. Be direct!
Playing around with what you want gets you very little in return. Of course, people enjoy a no “BS” approach. Be nice about how you present your intent, remember, again, it is about showing value of yourself and in someways, still about your reader(s). This paragraph is also an optional one. It is not needed in every attempt while building a networking relationship. You normally start out with sending paragraph 1 and 3. The reason, you want to build a rapport before asking for something in return. How often have you turned down person on their first approach asking you for something? Now, turn that person into a stranger asking you for something. How many times would you turn them down?
Below is an example of someone writing paragraph two to BBR Productions Inc.
“I have a great desire to continue growing my success in my field. Over the last 5 years I have reached heights on a good deal of my own personal goals, finding motivation at every turn. I am aware that you have signed projects on, such as Martyrd and Erin Chase, allowing them an outlet to move forward. Teaching, guiding them on how to best create opportunity for themselves. I would like the chance to present myself in an appointment based meeting to talk this out further in person, as I have a great ear for absorbing information and utilizing it.”
Deadly Nights (Band)